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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby albone on Fri May 01, 2009 8:52 pm

Hmmmm.

Sabrina squashed and in the hospital. Chloe being an unstoppable monster. This is becoming less story and more fantasy, and I'm sad it took me this long to figure it out. All I have to do is check my emails from you and the comments and it makes sense. The thing that made it click was how you wrote Brooke. It seems that you wrote everything in here that I wouldn't do in Rival Angels. Does that mean Sabrina will be out for a year? Will Chloe punch out God next? This has become very self-serving and gratuitous. I've always said that I couldn't write Heroine destruction, but if I wanted to cater to that crowd, I would show them this.

The new characters are fine, except there's no development with them. They're just around to beat up characters you don't like, or like to see get beat up. Then, monster Chloe comes and annhiliates them. A good story has a clear protagonist. Someone that even if we don't like, we still root for. I'm not seeing it here at all. It doesn't have to be Sabrina, but it has to be someone that we can identify with and support. This reads like a a video game match or a fantasy involving heroines getting beat up. I have stopped understanding where this story is going.

Feel free to continue, there is some entertainment value here but you kind of lost me.
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby lordmgc on Fri May 01, 2009 10:00 pm

Chapter 7: Aftermath


(Next day, 8 am, upstart girls apartment)

Krystin woke up and saw Brooke isn’t there.

Krystin said to herself “Ouch! My back still hurts! Damn! Brooke! What’s she doing all night, blumpkin again?”

Then Krystin noticed Sun isn’t home too, and leaves behind with messy things. Krystin is really angry.

Krystin shouted “Where the hell! Are you! Sun! Brooke! If I catch you anytime today, I’m gonna Divabreaker you! Rraaaggghhh!”

(8:30 PM, Hospital room 300)

Sabrina is on the bed watching television. Then suddenly someone knocked.

Sabrina said “Come in!”

Then Sun walked in the room. Sun quickly run towards to Sabrina, and hug her.

Sabrina said to Sun “Good to see you Sunshine!”

Sun said to Sabrina “you too Brina!”

Sun asked Sabrina “how are you feeling? When will you get out of here?”
Sabrina answered “I’m okay. Also, the doctors told that, I’m also clear to wrestle on Monday, but with caution though, also the doctor told me that, I will be release in the hospital tomorrow. ”

Sabrina asked Sun “So who the Seraphim’s belt? Is it Tachi?”

Sun answered “no! Chloe De Sade won the tournament and got the belt.”

Sabrina said Sun “oh! Tachi is very fast, I don’t even think, Chloe can catch her. Katherine and Jennifer interfere I think.”

Sun said to Sabrina “no! Brina! Katherine and Jennifer are banned from ring side, but Chloe used some dirty tricks though, and making Tachi unconscious.”

Sabrina looked down on the ground,

Sabrina said to Sun “Sorry, I didn’t win though, avenge what Tachi have done,”

Sabrina asked Sun “how’s your right hand and arm?”

Sun answered “it’s fine! Good news too, I’m clear to wrestle.”

Then suddenly, Sun saw a tail outside the window. Sun walked towards the window and opened it. Then suddenly Rose jumps over the window. Sun was shocked and got angry.

Sun shouted to Rose “Can’t you catgirls used the door.”

Then Rose opened the door, as Monica, Brenda, Snowkitten and Marina walked in.

Brenda said to Sabrina “Hi Sabrina! Enjoy the match last night!”

Sabrina said to Brenda “well I ah? Got squash! Last night was the worst performance I ever did.”

Marina and Brenda were shocked, while Monica smiles.

Sun shouted towards to Sabrina “No! that’s not a squash! Brina!”

Sabrina said to Sun, Brenda, Marina, Catgirls and Monica “it’s a squash match Sunshine, sorry! Tachi was too fast. I couldn’t even hit her.”

Marina asked Sun and Sabrina “I heard there was a tournament, last night for a prestige belt, who won?”

Sun answered “Chloe De Sade”

Marina, Catgirls, Monica and Brenda wear shock.

Sun said to Marina, Monica, Catgirls and Brenda “in the finals, Chloe against Tachi. Chloe used some dirty tactics to get the upper hand, but shocking part is that, with out help from Katherine and Jennifer.”

Sabrina asked Marina, Brenda, Catgirls and Monica “how come you girls didn’t went to the vearhouse?”

Brenda answered “We declined that offer, I know we’ll receive some consequences on Monday Night Meltdown for not participating.”

Sun said to Marina, Brenda, Catgirls, Monica “You must be careful! You girls might get ambush, like the others.”

Monica asked Sun “what do you know? you know anything of that ambush?”

Sun answered “Chloe told us, last night Suzy got ambush, and that the Hell’s Belles are also being targeted, something about chess pieces, rook, bishop, queen and York Sisters and Damage Inc.”

Brenda said to Sun “I hate mind games! Thanks for the warning though!”

Then suddenly someone knock.

Sabrina said “Come in!”

Then Aya, Aizawa, Karen, Megami and Ryohiko stand on the doorway, and they saw Brenda, Monica, Marina, Sun and Catgirls. They’re really happy.

Karen shouted “Lucky! All star cast!”

Megami shouted “hai! Hai!”

Aya, Aizawa, Karen, Megami and Ryohiko quickly went in the room. Megami quickly approaches towards Brenda. Megami quickly pulled out a rival angels’ heavyweight champion replica.

Megami asked Brenda “Sign autograph! Brenda-sama!”

Brenda said to Megami “okay!”

Then Brenda signed the belt, and returned it to Megami.

Sabrina asked Aya “Hi Aya! How are you?”
Aya answered “I’m fine!”

Sabrina asked Aya “it’s sad you loss to Chloe De Sade in the first round,”

Aya said to Sabrina “yeah! Chloe is great though! She even defeats Tachi.”

Ryohiko said to Sabrina “yeah! All five of us, never defeated Tachi, but Chloe. She did it.”

Sun said to Ryohiko “Hold the phone! I’m the one who defeat Shiori at first, if I wasn’t injured I will ninja’d Chloe and Tachi!”

Brenda asked Ryohiko, Aya, Aizawa, Karen and Megami “you girls wrestle? How old are you?”

Ryohiko answered “20”

Aya answered “18”

Aizawa answered “20”

Megami answered “21”

Karen answered “19”

Monica, Catgirls, Brenda. Sun. Marina and Sabrina were shock.

Brenda said to Ryohiko, Aya, Aizawa, Megami and Karen “I like to see your style, you’re very young going on pro.”

Megami said to Brenda “it’s an honor to spar with the rival angels champion herself.”

Brenda said to Megami “yeah! But don’t think it’s gonna be easy though, ask Snowkitten and Rose, how I train them. ”

Megami look towards to the Catgirls, while the catgirls just smiled towards to Megami.

Sabrina asked Aya “Aya, do you know how old is Tachi?”

Aya answered “I don’t know.”

Sabrina asked Aya “how do you know, I’m in the hospital?”

Aya answered “I saw you the backstage area, you wear on a stretcher. It’s sad.”

Ryohiko approaches towards to Marina and shoed her a ‘Marina Ortiz T-shirt’ .

Ryohiko asked Marina “can you sign it for me?”

Marina answered “sure no problem,”

After Marina sign an autograph on the to-shirt, Marina returned it to Ryohiko. Ryohiko sees in and was happy. Ryohiko smiles and bowed towards to Marina.

Ryohiko said to Marina “Arigatou!”

Marina asked Ryohiko, Aya, Aizawa, Karen and Megami “you girls are from Vearhouse wrestling right?”

Megami answered “technically, yes, but we’re also Rival Angels.”

Brenda, Monica, Sun, Sabrina and the Catgirls were shock.

Brenda asked Megami “so it is an invasion?”

Megami answered “no, we can have a match, but comes to title fight. Like we and the other from vearhouse wrestling can’t challenge rival angels belt, and vice versa, but we can challenge any original rival angels, same as the angels can challenge us.”

Sabrina said to Monica “Monica! If you’re free tomorrow, please come okay!”

Monica said to Sabrina “I’ll try!”

(In other hospital)

Geese walked into Gabrielle Reni’s room. Geese approaches towards to Gabrielle.

Geese asked Gabrielle “You summoned me Reni?”

Gabrielle answered “yes Mr. Nightlight. At your first day on your job, an unexpected match, Angels got attack by unknown people, and inviting your so called wrestler in the angel dome not only that, inviting the rival angels to your vearhouse. There’s enough violation to sue you Mr. Nightlight.”

Geese said to Gabrielle “I humbly and truly sorry for that Gabrielle, I was actually testing their capabilities, no harm.”

Gabrielle shouted towards to Geese “No Harm! No Harm! Many of my wrestler got sideline, in which the company has to pay for it. When I was handling Rival Angels, rare wrestler got in the sideline,”

Gabrielle asked Geese “are you getting my angels to wrestle your organization? Or just to promote your vearhouse?”

Geese answered “I’m not promoting my organization, Gabrielle. I just want to see your talent handle my wrestlers, and actually I’m promoting rival angels too.”
Gabrielle said to Geese “Promoting! More like destroying!”

Geese said to Gabrielle “please understand, though. What’s my intention of your rival angels.”

Geese puts a DVD disc on the table.

Geese said to Gabrielle “this DVD, contain Tuesday match. How I made the match, now I have some business thing to do, so I have to excuse myself Gabrielle.”

Then Geese turned around and walked out from the room.

(Paris, France, De Sade private airfield)

A plane arrived, then Katherine, Chloe and Jennifer walked out from the plane. Jennifer raised her Celestial belt, while Chloe raised her Seraphim’s belt. Then the chevaliers cheers.

The chevaliers cheers “All fall to the Hell’s Belles! All hail ‘white queen’ Chloe De Sade!”

As Chloe, Katherine and Jennifer walked towards a limousine.

(one hour later)

Katherine, Jennifer and Chloe arrived in Chloe mansion.

Chloe said to Jennifer and Katherine “Katherine, Jennifer you go enjoy yourself for a while. I have some other business to attend to.”

Katherine asked Chloe “you sure you won’t need us to assist you?”

Chloe answered “I’m sure!”

Chloe walked into the limousine again. Inside the limousine, Chloe slightly fainted on the couch, Chloe grabs the phone.

(on the phone)

Chloe said “to the infirmary.”

Then the limousine quick drove towards the infirmary, while Katherine and Jennifer walked into the mansion, but Katherine is still worried on Chloe. Jennifer noticed Katherine worried.

Jennifer asked Katherine “Katherine, what wrong? Is it that the belt? I mean I won?”
Katherine answered “it’s Chloe, I’m worried though. She’s not telling, what the problem.”

Jennifer said to Katherine “don’t worry, she always a back-up plan.”

Katherine said to Jennifer “I hope your right, Jen-baby!”

(four hours later, Paris, France. De Sade private infirmary)

Doctor said to Chloe “My Queen, you hurt your throat though, and got some minor injuries, on Monday Meltdown Match, I suggest you forfeit, your match against Brenda.”

Chloe quickly stands up and choke the doctor,

Chloe shouted towards the doctor “Forfeit! I went through hell, to be the number want contender. How dare you! You peasant!”

Doctor said to Chloe “okay! I apologize. Just be careful though.”

Then Chloe released the doctor as, the doctor walked away from Chloe. Chloe is very angry, and grabs an empty bottle threw it on the wall.

Chloe said to herself “the only chance, for I being the number one contender and this have to happen. I have to rest the whole day, and tomorrow.”

(Later that night, In the hospital, Sabrina’s room)

Sun asked Sabrina “what a day, Brina! And why did you invited that Monica come by tomorrow? Tomorrow is my day. Sunday!”

Sabrina answered “I just want to have fun, you know Sunshine.”

Sabrina looked down, and felt uncomfortable.

Sun asked Sabrina “What’s wrong Brina?”

Sabrina answered “Last night match! Tachi squash me in that match, I never felt like that when I came to rival angels, not only that the crowd hates me, they booo me.”

Sun said to Sabrina “that’s long gone Brina! We’re heading back to angel dome on Monday.”
Sun laid down on the couch.

Sun said to Sabrina “I’ll be staying here Brina! Krystin can handle things alone.”

Sabrina asked Sun “what about Brooke?”

Sun answered “Brooke didn’t sleep at the apartment last night.”

Sabrina asked Sun “where is she?”

Sun answered “I have no idea!”

To Be Continued....
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby lordmgc on Sat May 02, 2009 3:16 pm

Chapter 8: Early Monday

(Angel Dome 7:00AM Monday)

Sabrina is jogging backstage, while jogging.

Sabrina said to herself “I’m still not in 100% for my title match later against Brooke. Ha! Yesterday was fun though, Monica and I when for roller coaster ride, it’s fun being with Monica.”

Then suddenly Sabrina saw Camilla standing in front of her wear her wrestling gear, Sabrina quickly stop and prepared herself.

Sabrina asked Camilla “what are you doing here Camilla?”

Camilla answered “same you’re doing here, ultragirl, but not to come fight you thought. Anyways after your jogging, meet at the ring, alone, I want to have a little chat.”

Sabrina said to Camilla “if you want to talk, talk now!”

Camilla said to Sabrina “later!”

As Camilla turned around walked away, Sabrina just followed Camilla from behind. Camilla notice that Sabrina is following.

Camilla asked Sabrina “so you’re finish jogging?”

Sabrina answered “actually, I cut my jogging time short. I like a little chat for now,”

(3 minutes later)

Camilla and Sabrina are at ringside area.

Camilla asked Sabrina “have you brought your wrestling gear?”

Sabrina answered “if you want talk, is it require I wear my wrestling.”

Camilla said to Sabrina “I’m helping you in your match later on tonight against Brooke, and your not in top shape.”

Sabrina said to herself “I’ll just hang around her for while, if I got a chance, I’ll ultrakick her.”

Camilla walked into the ring.

Camilla said to Sabrina “Come Sabrina.”

Sabrina walked into the ring, while Camilla did a handstand.

Camilla said to Sabrina “I’ll show you something Sabrina!”

Sabrina said to Camilla “Like I can’t do that,”

Then Sabrina did a handstand also, Camilla smiled as Sabrina did a handstand. Then Camilla kicked forward while in handstand, then on handstand Camilla did a leg split and used her hand to spin her around twice.

Camilla said to Sabrina “you try it, now Sabrina.”

Sabrina kicked forward a few times, then leg split and then used her hands to spin her around.

Camilla stands up both with her feet, and applause on Sabrina, while Sabrina also stands on her feet.

Sabrina said to Camilla “I don’t think, that will work, against Brooke. She could easily grab my leg and front spinebuster me.”

Camilla said to Sabrina “not to worry, though.”

Then Camilla walked near the turnbuckle, then Camilla used a handstand then locked the top turnbuckle with her legs. Then released it, then Camilla kicked the turnbuckle with both feet. Then Camilla stands on her feet again.

Camilla said to Sabrina “now Sabrina, your turn. “

Sabrina walked towards to the turnbuckle, and Sabrina handstand and kicked the turnbuckle with both feet, and then stand on her both feet again.

Sabrina asked Camilla “why are you helping me?”

Camilla answered “I just wanted too ultragirl,”

Sabrina said to Camilla “Call me Sabrina,”

Sabrina asked Camilla “Camilla, do you know to defeat Tachi? She’s just too fast.”

Camilla answered “The Jigoku ladies, are not easy. Even I can’t win them. They’ve mastered the art called shunpo, or flash step. usually disappeared in a sec, and appeared again.”

Sabrina asked Camilla “if I encounter them, how can I defeat them If I encounter one of them next?”

Camilla looked down and answered “That I can’t answer, there’s one angel who defeat her in the match, try asking her for advice. And you don’t have to worry, both Konayuki sister won’t be a bother.”

Sabrina asked Camilla “do you know Kurenai?”

Camilla answered “Kurenai Shinkirou, the leader of the one Jigoku set stable, I never saw her fight or in match. My advice is just avoid her,”

Sabrina asked Camilla “last Question though, if you don’t mind. Why did you save Xtina?”

Camilla answered “Xtina, was attack outside the ring and promoting, isn’t right to attack her, I really have to stop those girls or other of the angel got injured.”

Camilla leaps on the top rope, and executed a moonsault, and land on the mat with her feet.

Camilla said to Sabrina “Moonsault, there are still varieties on it, you’ll figure.”

Then Camilla walked out from the ring, Sabrina notice Camilla is leaving.

Sabrina said to Camilla “Camilla wait! Camilla!”

But Camilla just walked out. A few minutes later, Brenda, Monica, Marina and the Catgirls arrived. Brenda, Monica and Catgrils noticed Sabrina at the ring alone.

Brenda asked Sabrina “Sabrina, training so early?”

Sabrina smiled and answered Brenda “Yeah!”

Brenda said to Sabrina “good for you though, when you’re done, we need to use the ring too, I have a match later against the De Sade.”

Sabrina said to Brenda “I’m finish here though, you can use it.”

Sabrina walked down from the ring, and walk past by Monica.

Sabrina said to Monica “We have a great time together yesterday Monica.”

Monica said to Sabrina “yeah! It’s was fan,”

Sabrina said to Monica “we’ll do that sometime okay.”

Then suddenly, Sara and Xtina arrived. Sara got angry at Xtina.

Sara shouted to Xtina “you drag me here, for this! I thought we’ll have the ring all alone.”

Brenda saw Sara and Xtina, As Xtina and Sara was about to leave.

Brenda said to herself “this keeps in better and better.”

Brenda said to Sara and Xtina “Sara, Xtina come here! If you want to practice.”

Brenda said to Sabrina “you too Sabrina, you’re free to join if you want.”

Sabrina said to Brenda “I already done for the day, and I don’t want to push myself though.”

Brenda said to Sabrina “as you wish Sabrina.”

Sabrina walked away.

Sabrina said to herself “I don’t know what Camilla’s intention though, it’s a good one.”

Then suddenly Sabrina saw Sun is coming towards her.

Sun shouted towards to Sabrina “Brina! You’re done! Why didn’t you invite me Brina!”

Sabrina said to Sun “calm down Sunshine! I notice you’re sleeping very comfortable, I don’t want to disturb you.”

Sun said to Sabrina “getting out with a ninja, it’s dangerous.”

Sabrina said to herself “hehe!!”
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby lordmgc on Sat May 02, 2009 3:17 pm

Chapter 9: Returning Angels


(Angel Dome, Upstart girls, locker room. 6:00PM)

Sabrina is preparing for her title match against Brooke, then suddenly someone knocked.

Sabrina said “Come in”

Geese walked in and approaches Sabrina.

Geese said to Sabrina “Doctor says that, your not clear to wrestle, I’m sorry I have to give the belt to Brooke.”

Sabrina said to Geese “What! No! I’m fine, I’m gonna wrestle Brooke and defend the title, sorry Mr. Nightlight, I have to defend this T.V. title at all cost, and I know my body more than you do. I’m okay and ready to go.”

Geese said to Sabrina “suit yourself”

Then Geese walked out from the locker. Then few seconds later, Sun and Krystin walked in. Sun quickly walked towards to Sabrina.

Sun asked Sabrina “you ready for Brooke?”

Sabrina answered “yeah! Sunshine!”

Sun asked Sabrina “you need back up? I’m ready for go to if you need me.”

Sabrina answered “again, no Sunshine! I can handle Brooke.”

Kyrstin asked Sabrina and Sun “by the way, where is Brooke? She’s acting weird not coming home.”

Sabrina answered “maybe out training, it’s still early you know.”

Then suddenly somebody knocked.

Sabrina said “Come in!”

Then Megami, Aya, Aikawa, Ryohiko and Karen walked in with their bags.

Sun asked Megami, Aya, Aikawa, Ryohiko and Karen “what are you doing here? I’m not signing any autographs.”

Sabrina said to Sun “come on Sun,”
Megami said to Sabrina, Krystin and Sun “sorry, but Geese told us that we’ll be sharing locker rooms.”

Krystin said to Megami “Hell no!”

Sabrina said to Krystin “oh! come on Krystin.”

Aya approaches towards to Sabrina.

Aya said to Sabrina “Good luck in your match later! Sabrina!”

Sabrina said to Aya “Thanks!”

Then suddenly somebody knocked. Aya quickly run to opened, when Aya opened. Aya just stared as if she saw a ghost.

Megami asked Aya “Da re? Aya?”

Then Megami saw it’s Camilla. Camilla just walked in. Krystin and Sun saw Camilla. Krystin and Sun stand up and prepare themselves, As Camilla approaches towards to Sabrina,

Sabrina asked Camilla “what brings you here? Camilla?”

Camilla answered “I was assign here, to share locker room.”

Sabrina said to Camilla “that’s cool, Camilla, although I haven’t got the last move.”

Camilla gave an ipod to Sabrina, as Sabrina received it.

Camilla said to Sabrina “there’s the moves in the video, I want to show, study it well Sabrina.”

As Camilla walked away, then Sabrina activated the video. Sabrina saw Camilla’s move. Camilla did a half moonsault from the top rope and dropkick her opponent’s back, after the, Camilla half moonsault, and kicked her opponent right shoulder. Then it end. Sun approaches to Sabrina.

Sun asked Sabrina “what’s up Sabrina?”

Sabrina answered “it’s nothing Sunshine!”


(Xtina locker room)

Sara walked in and approaches towards to Xtina.

Sara said to Xtina “Hey Xtina! You got a match later against Summer and Winter.”

Xtina said to Sara “I’m hype up! I got unfinished business with them though!”

Then suddenly, someone knocked the door.

Sara said to Xtina “Xtina, you get it Xtina.”

Xtina asked Sara “Why me?”

Sara answered “this is your locker room, dah!”

Xtina said to Sara “why? Scared of ambush or a boogeyman will get you.”

Sara said to Xtina “just get the door! Will ya!”

Xtina stands up and opened the door. Xtina saw Shannon.

Xtina said to Shannon “oh! it’s you Shannon.”

Shannon said to Xtina “yes, good thing I’m alright after that ambush, I requested Mr. Geese Nightlight to stay here, just in case.”

Shannon asked Xtina “may I come in?”

Xtina answered “sure!”

As Shannon walked it, Shannon was surprise to see Sara.

Shannon said to Sara “Miss Valentine!”

Then Sara was surprise to see Shannon.

Sara shouted and asked Shannon “McCourt, what are you doing here?”

Shannon answered “obviously I’m here, share me a little room though.”

Xtina said to Sara and Shannon “ah! Please don’t fight in my locker room, though.”

(7:15, Angel Dome, Rua’s locker room)

Brenda said to Monica “That Geese! Putting tag team match, against his unknown fighter.”

Monica said Brenda “Catgirls will be fine!”

Brenda said to Monica “what if the Cheskova twins, against Catgirls.”

Rose said to Brenda “hehe! Cheskova twins will be scratch up, if they face us.”

Snowkitten said to Brenda “yeah yeah! Scratch”

Brenda asked Monica “Monica, can I ask you a favor though. What over them, before my match will you?”

Monica asked Brenda “what a about you, if the Hell’s Belles ambush you in the locker room?”

Brenda answered “don’t worry about me.”

Then suddenly Marina arrived.

Brenda said to Monica “Marina is here, heheh!”

(Pathway to Hell’s Belles skybox)

Josephine walking towards the Hell’s Belles Skybox, then along the way, Josephine saw Nikki and Kyra. Josephine approaches them.

Josephine asked Kyra and Nikki “what are you two doing here?”

Nikki answered “same thing as you coming here too, Jo. But the Hell’s Belles aren’t in their skybox yet, it’s weird though, usually they came very early to set up but know it’s almost show time, they haven’t arrived.”

Josephine said to Kyra and Nikki “possibly they’ve been ambush?”

Kyra answered “possibly, though.”

Nikki asked Josephine “So what’s you doing here though? Are you planning something like joining the Hell’s Belles just to avenge your sister?”

Josephine shouted to Nikki “Why is that Nikki! I thinking your doing the same too right! If what you gonna do! If the Hell’s Belles are no more! Nikki! Kyra!”

Nikki asked Josephine “what about you! Josephine! What are you gonna do? After all, you can’t fight alone though.”

Josephine said to Nikki “same as you two. You two can’t win either!”

Nikki asked Josephine “ha! Care to join Damage inc for the last time? I’m only gonna say this once.”

Josephine remembered some of the fan days. The York Sister and Damage Inc have in Rival Angels.

Josephine answered “sure, one last time.”


To Be Contiued....
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby lordmgc on Mon May 04, 2009 11:34 pm

Chapter 10: Tag Team Matches

(Angel Dome Arena. 8PM)

As the show starts, Geese walked towards the ring, as the crowd booo’ed Geese. Some even threw plastic cup, papers towards to Geese. When Geese is in the ring with a microphone.

Geese said “As you heard on the net. That the angels fought on Vearhouse, that’s true and the false rumors on the net is that, I’m the one is mastermind the ambush assaults, That my audience it’s not true. Let’s talk about the match tonight. Belt will be defended. TV Champion “Ultragirl” Sabrina Mancini will defend her belt against “Aphrodite” Brooke Lennox. The main event, The heavyweight Champion Brenda Rua will defend her belt against ‘The White Queen’ Chloe De Sade, in a electrifying hell in a cell, best of seven match. Let the first match begin!”

Then Geese walked out from the ring.

Summer
Height:6”0
Weight: 144lbs
Wrestling style: Balance
Finisher: Summersault splash off the top turnbuckle
Skin tone: Brunette
Body type: mid
Hair color: Blonde
Hair Length: Long

Winter
Height: 5”0
Weight: 105
Wrestling style: strike/ speed
Finisher: Avalanche (Rolling thunder)
Body Type: Thin
Skin tone: White
Hair color: Ash white
Hair length: Long
Then Spring, Summer, Autumn and Winter walked towards the ring. Then few minutes later, Xtina, Shannon and Sara walked towards the ring. Xtina approaches the referee.

Xtina said to the Referee “can we ask Summer and Winter companions, not at ringside to prevent, interference.”

Referee said to Xtina “okay, no problem”

Referee said to Spring and Autumn “those in your team, not in this fight, back to the locker room.”

The crowd roared cheered, as Spring and Autumn walked back to the locker room with anger and disappointment.

Sara said to Xtina “hahah! Neat job Xtina!”

Xtina asked Sara “you want me to start?”

Sara answered “you’ll start, go ahead”

Summer said to Winter “I’ll start,”

Then the bell ring. Ding ding. Xtina faces Summer. Xtina and Summer lock in a collar elbow tie up. Xtina easily turned and grabs Summer from behind. Xtina quickly chop block Summer’s left leg twice, as Summer fell to the ground. Xtina grabs Summer’s left leg and kick it five times. Xtina applied a leg lock on Summer.

Xtina said to Summer “what to fight me, fight me now!”

As Summer screams in pain “aaahhh”

Summer crawled towards to the ropes, then Summer grabs the bottom ropes, as Xtina quickly released the hold, but Xtina quickly dragged Summer need their corner, then Xtina applied another leg lock on Summer, while tagging Sara. Sara quickly climb on the top turnbuckle and executed a elbow drop from the top rope at the chest of Summer. Then Xtina walked back to the corner, while Sara now is the legal angel. Then Sara quickly applied a sleeper hold on Summer.

Xtina said to Sara “concentrate on her left leg Sara,”

Sara said to Xtina “I know, I know! I do it later.”

Shannon said to Sara “Xtina is right, Sara! Go on leg”

Then suddenly Summer got on vertical base, then rammed Sara back to their corner. As Winter tagged in. then Summer body slammed Sara to ground as Winter comes in. Winter legged drop on Sara neck. Then Winter picked up Sara and irish whip, but Sara quickly baseball slide to the outside. Then Sara quickly grabs Summer’s left leg and pulled and Summer fells to the outside. Winter quickly leaps over the top robe and splash down towards to Sara, but Sara easily evade the attack, then Winter hits the ground. Then Sara quickly grabs Winter and rolled her back to ring. Sara used the ropes to execute a somersault leg drop onto Winter’s chest.

(Back in the upstart locker room)

Sun is very angry.

Sun shouted “That Valentine! Copied my move,”

Krystin said to Sun “What! it’s hasn’t have your name on it Sun.”

Aya said to Sun and Krystin “but Sun’s are better. Heh!”

Sun said to Aya “hell yeah!”

Krystin said to Aya and Sun “whatever!”

(In the ring)

Sara elbow drop on Winter’s chest. Then Sara pinned Winter. 1…but Winter easily kickout. Sara quickly went to her corner and tag Xtina. When Xtina walked to the ring, Winter hits a dropkick on Xtina’s face. Xtina fell down. Winter picked up Xtina and delivered Xtina a DDT. Winter picked up Xtina and irish whip Xtina to their corner. Winter speared Xtina. Then Winter tagged Summer in. Winter walked back to the corner while Summer went to the ring. Summer dropkicked Xtina on the face, then Summer picked up Xtina and place her on the top turnbuckle. Then Summer climbs the top turnbuckle and executed the Superplex on Xtina. Summer pinned Xtina. 1….2. then Sara quickly kicked Summer’s back.

Referee said to Sara “Back to your corner Sara.”

Then Winter executed a elbow from the top turnbuckle and hits Xtina’s chest, behind the referee’s back then quickly Winter rolled back out of the ring, while Sara walked back to her corner. Summer quickly pinned Xtina. 1….2..then Xtina kickout. Summer elbow drop Xtina on the chest twice. Then again Summer pinned Xtina. 1….2. Xtina kickout. Summer pulled Xtina up, and clotheline Xtine, but Xtina ducked and dropped kick Summer’s left leg again. Then Xtina quickly rolled towards her corner and tags Sara. Sara quickly delivered a elbow drop on Summer chest, then Sara quickly grabs Summer left leg and kicked it twice, and Sara quickly applied a single leg lock.

Summer screamed in pain “aaaaahhh!”

Then suddenly out of nowhere, Winter hits a top rope leg drop on Sara’s chest. Then Sara released Summer, as Winter quickly walked back to her corner. Then Summer picks up and lift Sara vertically, then few seconds later, Summer executed a sit down powerbomb on Sara.

Xtina shouted “Sara!”

Shannon said to Xtina “Xtina, ready to help, Sara anytime now. She can’t handle a powerbomb.”

Xtina said to Shannon “I know! Miss McCourt!”

Summer tagged in Winter, but then Summer grabs Sara’s right leg, and executed an ankle lock. Xtina quickly walked out from her corner, but the referee blocked Xtina.

Xtina said to the referee “Referee! They’re double teaming Sara!”

Referee said to Xtina “back to you corner Xtina!”

While Winter climbs on the top turnbuckle and executed a moonsault and hits Sara’s back.

Sara screamed in pain “aaaaahhhgg!”

Then Summer walked back to her corner, as Winter quickly executed a camel crotch on Sara, but Sara used her right foot and put it on the bottom ropes. Then Winter quickly tagged in Summer. Winter pick up Sara and executed a spinning neckbreaker, after that Winter walked back to her corner. Summer quickly climbs over the top turnbuckle and executed a frog splash, but Sara countered it with knees. Summer got hit on Sara’s double knee. Then Sara quickly rolled and tagged Xtina in. Xtina quickly runs and dropkicked Summer’s face. Then Xtina quickly dragged Summer back into the middle of the ring, and Xtina applied the leg lock again.

Summer screamed in pain “aaaahhhh”

The referee asked Summer “you gonna give up?”

Summer answered “no!”

Then Xtina released the hold, but quickly executed an elbow drop on Summer’s left leg, then Xtina quickly applied the leg lock again on Summer, but suddenly Winter leg dropped Xtina on the chest, so Xtina release the hold, while Winter quickly walked back to her corner. Summer stands up and punched Xtina’s head ten times, then Summer tagged Winter in. Winter climbs to the top turnbuckle as Summer holds Winter’s hands. Then Winter executed a seating senton, while Summer assisted it (Cold Summer Night),

But Xtina easily rolled out of the way, as Winter hits the mat. Xtina quickly dropkick Summer from behind, as Summer falls out of the ring. Xtina quickly grabs Winter from behind and executed a german suplex pin. 1…..2..then Winter kickout.

Xtina said to Sara “Double team!”

Sara quickly climbs on the top turnbuckle as Xtina irish whip Winter, but Winter reverse it.

Xtina shouted towards to Sara “no!”

As Sara accidentally hits the After School Special on Xtina.

Sara said to Xtina “no!”

Sara stands up, but Winter dropped Sara. Sara fells outside the ring. Winter quickly pinned Xtina. 1…..2…but the referee saw Xtina’s right leg is on the bottom ropes.

Referee said to Winter “her foot is on the bottom ropes,”

Winter quickly dragged Xtina into the middle. Winter quickly successfully executed her finisher Avalance on Xtina. Winter hooked Xtina’s right leg for the pin. 1……2…but Sara quickly dropkick Winter’s face. The referee quickly blocked Sara ways, Sara quickly returned back to her corner, As Winter tagged Summer back in.

Winter said to Summer “Out cold, she is”

Summer quickly dragged Xtina near the turnbuckle, as Summer climbs to the top turnbuckle. Summer executed the somersault splash on Xtina, then Winter and Sara quickly walked into the ring. Winter charges towards to Sara, but Sara easily avoided Winter as the referee counted 1…..2…Sara quickly low dropkick Summer’s left knee and it broke the count, Xtina is still unconscious in the ring. Sara quickly baseball slide out of the ring and grabs Summer’s left leg and pulled her out. Then Winter quickly jumps over the top rope, hits Sara, but also accidentally hits Summer as well. Summer slightly twisted her left leg. Meanwhile Xtina is still daze from the two finisher she took, and slowly stands up, then Summer rolled back into the ring as well. Xtina quickly grabs Summer by the neck and DDT Summer, meanwhile outside the ring Sara dropped kicked Winter. Sara saw an opportunity, so Sara quickly climbs to the top turnbuckle.

Sara said Xtina “Xtina double team!”

Xtina quickly grabs Summer and Irish whip her towards the turnbuckle, as Sara executed the After School Special on Summer. Then Sara quickly rolled back outside the ring, while Xtina quickly dragged Summer into the middle of the ring.

then Xtina quickly applied the sharpshooter on Summer in the middle of ring. Summer quickly taps out. As the bell ring. Ding ding ding! The winner of the match the team of Sara Valentin and Xtina Carpenter.

Xtina, Sara and Shannon happily walked back to the locker room, as Summer watched them angrily.

(4 minutes later, Xtina locker room)

Xtina, Sara and Shannon happily walked in to the locker room.

Sara said to Xtina “perfect execution of the double team Special. Ha! I totally nail it! To those season girls whatever they call them.”

Xtina said to Sara “yeah! I didn’t know you’re great in tag teams,”

Sara said to Xtina “Ha! I’m the best, Xtina! The key factor of winning is me. After them, we’re going for the tag teams belts, yeah!”

Then suddenly Brenda, Catgirls, Monica and Marina arrived.

Brenda said to Xtina and Sara “Don’t be over confident, against the Catgirls. The Catgirls are still undefeated in tag team matches you know, after all your coordination isn’t still haven’t perfected yet, but I must say congratulation for your win.”

Sara said to Brenda “yeah! Thanks to me though!”

Xtina silently said “ha? Like I wasn’t the one who made Summer’s tap.”

Then suddenly, Loretta arrives. Loretta is carrying her bag.

Xtina asked Loretta “Loretta? What are you doing here?”

Loretta said to Xtina “that no good! Geese, get out from my locker room. I need a locker room, So I.”

Then Loretta looked down and asked Xtina “Xtina, can you share some space?”

Xtina asked Shannon “Shannon, what do you think?”

Shannon answered “I really can’t decide though, it’s your locker room.”

Sara said to Loretta “Come on in! Diaz!”

Shannon and Xtina wear shocked.

Xtina shouted towards to Sara “What! up! Sara, this is my locker room.”

Sara said to Xtina “I’m kinda bored hanging with you two, education bacon what a combination.”

Shannon said to Sara “Sara! That’s very rude of saying that,”

Marina said to Shannon, Sara, Xtina and Loretta “actually, if you not comfortable having Loretta here, maybe we can offer,”

Loretta said to Marina “I didn’t ask you Ortiz!”

Marina said to Loretta “suit yourself Loretta!”

Xtina said to Loretta “okay, Loretta you can stay. No backstabbing okay!”

Loretta said to Xtina “Si! Si!”

Brenda, Marina, Monica and the Catgirls turned and walked away.

Sara shouted to Brenda “Brenda wait!”

Brenda, Marina, Monica and the catgirls stopped, as Sara runs towards to Brenda. Sara cried.

Sara said to Brenda “Thank you! Thank you! For helping me! Even though I’m a heel. I loss so many matches in the past, now you taught me to be a better wrestler than before. I wish I have teacher like you! Thank you!”

Brenda said to Sara “No problem! Sara!”

Brenda, Monica, Marina and the Catgirls walked away.

(Geese’s office)

Geese said to Anya, Anka and Helhen “you three big apes, didn’t executed the job done, Shannon, Josephine, Kyra and Nikki still here, you didn’t took care of them.”

Then suddenly Kurenai appeared behind Geese.

Geese said to Kurenai “even you Kurenai! Shiori and Tachi both defeated, I thought, Tachi! Already gonna win! What the hell happen.”

Kurenai answered “well, De Sade cheated as you saw. Some one is hiding underneath the ring, and giving her a bottle which contained some black powder.”

Geese said to Kurenai “only four of you remain, ha!”

Kurenai smiled towards to Geese.
Kurenai said to Geese “hehe! As you know, Tachi is the only member of our team who lose. Shiori is just an apprentice. Look at her she just even used the shunpo no jutsu!”

Geese said to Kurenai “I notice, Chloe De Sade knows about your little Shunpo you call it.”

Kurenai “yes, but we’re more than that Geese.”

Geese said to Kurenai “good thing some ladies offered their service!”

(Upstart locker)

Sabrina said to Krystin and Sun “Brooke is late, maybe I should text her.”

Sun said to Sabrina “that’s a new one Brina, texting your opponent to come.”

Krystin said to Sabrina “after all! If she didn’t show up, you won’t have trouble in the ring, you’ll just win it.”

Sabrina said to Krystin and Sun “isn’t odd Brooke, is the want who challenge me, then abandon it on that night, also Brooke must know the consequence of no show.”

Sun said to Sabrina “Brina! Brina! Brooke must choke it up, can’t handle the pressure.”

(In the Ring)

Catgirls waited their opponent.

Rose asked Snowkitten “if the Cheskova twins be are opponent, will we forfeit?”

Snowkitten answered “Meow! No! we will not forfet! we’re undefeated in tag team.”

Then suddenly on the Rival Angels titantron, the Tower of Terror appeared. Then few seconds later, the Tower of Terrors arrive as they walked towards the ring. Then suddenly, Geese appeared underneath titantron with a microphone.

Geese said “Hold it!”

As the crowd roared in booo’ed Geese.

Geese said to the Tower of Terrors and the Catgirls “to make this match interesting, let’s postpone this until later, to make it more interesting, the match will be a buried alive VS kitty litter box match. On my right, there will a graveyard soil putting here, and a pair of shovel to use, while on my left there will be putting here a special kitty sand. The only different is that, graveyard soil has a shovel, to used, while the catgirls have their own paws. Rules are bury our opponent, specifically, bury them correctly. Tower of Terror bury their opponent in the graveyard, while Catgirls bury your opponent in the kitty sand. The match is tornado tag match style, and it’s in extreme rules, since Tower of Terror against Catgirls will be postpone till later this event, we’ll have two impromptu single matches, That is all, and by the way, it’s for the tag team title.”

Then Geese walked out from the arena, but the Tower of Terrors quickly rushed into the ring, as the Catgirls awaits. Zombie Luna charges towards to Snowkitten. Zombie Luna kicked Snowkitten with a big boot, but Snowkitten easily ducked down and quickly pivot and appeared behind Zombie Luna. Snowkitten dropkicked Zombie Luna’s leg, as Zombie Luna kneeled down, Snowkitten quickly executed a double knee backbreaker on Zombie Luna. Meanwhile Lover Lola bounces off the ropes and charges towards to Rose Ryoko. Lover Lola executed a flying lariat and hits Rose Ryoko. Lover Lola wasted no time and spring off the second ropes and executed middle springboard moonsault on Rose Ryoko, but Rose Ryoko quickly countered it with double knee as it hits Lover Lola’s chest. Then the Catgirls quickly rolled out from the ring, leaving the tower of terrors laying down on the ring.

(Few minutes later, in the Brenda’s locker room)

Brenda said to the Catgirls “good thing, it’s only those tower of terrors, do be careful though. Don’t be overconfident. In an extreme rules, Tower of Terror will still be dangerous.”

Marina asked Brenda “Brenda, it’s an extreme rules. There could be ambush again, no disqualification, think about it. Hell’s Belles interfering, mind games to keep you distrcuted from your game plan later,”

Monica said to Brenda “The Hell’s Belles aren’t here yet.”

Brenda said to Monica, Marina and the Catgirls “that’s keeps me a bit worried.”

To be Continued.....
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby BrendaRua on Wed May 06, 2009 8:52 pm

Lots of action and build up! Great suspense too!
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby lordmgc on Wed May 13, 2009 3:12 pm

Chapter 11: Imprompt two Matches

(On the arena)

On the titantron screen there’s a match then random select of what type of match. Then suddenly it stopped ‘Singles match, pinfall or Submission,’ then again random select of angels. Then Loretta Diaz and ‘Lil Dragon’ Sun Wong’s was shown on the screen.

(Upstart Locker room)

Sun shouted “Yeah! Ninja’d time!”

Krystin said to Sun “yeah! It’s time for the ninja to get her stomp.”

Sun shouted Krystin “Shut the hell up Krystin! I know you’ve loss to Loretta in the past.”

Krystin said to Sun “whatever Sun! and I know like the lil dragon to tap out!”

Sun shouted to Krystin “Why you!”

Sabrina said to Sun “haha! Go to ring Sunshine! It’s your turn! Give her!”

Sabrina and Sun shouted “Ninja’D!”

Sun said to Krystin “I’ll be back and Ninja you! Krystin! You’re the model ‘The Definition of got ninja’d nation’ Hahaha!”

Sun quickly runs out from the locker, while Krystin is very angry. Sabrina, Aya, Aizawa, Karen and Ryohiko laugh their heart out.

Sabrina said to Krystin “seriously Krystin, Sunshine is just making fun.”

Krystin just walked out from the locker room angry.

Aya shouted to Krystin “Don’t let the door hit you on the way out!”

(few minutes later)

In the ring Loretta is waiting for Sun, then few seconds later, Sun came into the ring. Then Loretta and Sun face to face, with some trash talk.

Loretta said to Sun “you little good for nothing loser, you humiliated me for the last time lil’ one.”

Sun said to Loretta “woo! I’m scared, hahaha! Not! I humiliated you once, but this time you’re getting it! Ninja’d!”

Then Loretta angry pushed Sun, as the bell rang. Ding Ding! Sun bounces off the ropes, then Loretta clothesline Sun, but Sun easily ducked down. Loretta quickly turned around, as Sun executed a jumping roundhouse kick on Loretta face. Loretta crushed down to the mat. As Loretta is on her knees, Sun quickly executed a enzuguri, then Loretta crushed down to the mat and rolled out of the ring. Sun quickly leaps on the top ropes and executed a moonsault splash on Loretta, but Loretta easily dodges it as Sun hits the ground. Loretta quickly picked Sun up and irish whip Sun towards the steel steps. Sun’s knees collided with the steel steps and fell to the ground.

Sun screamed in pain “aaaahhhh!”

Loretta confidently approaches towards to Sun. Loretta picked Sun up and puts Sun’s body on the bottom ropes hanging. With Sun’s hanging on the bottom ropes, Loretta executed a rope hung implant DDT on Sun. Loretta quickly rolled back into the ring, while Sun is laid down outside the ring. The referee counted 5…..6….7. Sun weakly stands up on the 8 count, and rolled back to ring at 9. Loretta wasted no time and picked up Sun and irish whip Sun towards the turnbuckle with force. Sun’s back collided with the turnbuckle and crushed down to the mat. Then Loretta grabs Sun’s both legs.

Loretta shouted “This is for you ultra-loser!”

Then Loretta slingshot Sun towards the turnbuckle, but before Sun’s face got hit on the turnbuckle, Sun quickly grabs the ropes and handstand. Sun slowly land on her feet, but Loretta clothesline Sun. Sun hits the crushed down to the mat. Loretta executed a sharpshooter on Sun.

Sun screamed in pain “aaaahhhh! Let Go!”

Sun quickly grabs the bottom ropes, the referee counted 1…..2…..3….4. then Loretta released the hold. Sun rolled out the ring and hold knees. Loretta rolled out to the outside as well. Loretta picked up Sun, and irish whip Sun towards the barricade, but Sun quickly reversed it, now Loretta collide with the barricade and landed on the front raw. Sun weakly rolled back into the ring, then grabs the ropes to help her stand up.

Sun said to herself “Damn! My knees are in bad way. Loretta really damaged it, I must be careful can’t afford to make any mistakes.”

Then Loretta rolled back into the ring, Loretta saw Sun is using the ropes for her t to stand. Loretta charges towards to Sun, but Sun easily sidestep as Loretta clumsily fell outside the ring. Sun slowly walked towards the middle of the ring, and waited for Loretta. Then Loretta rolled back into the ring. Loretta quickly charges towards to Sun again, Sun side stepped again, but Loretta caught Sun’s right hand. Then Loretta pulled Sun towards her and kneed Sun’s stomach. Loretta executed an exploder suplex on Sun. Loretta quickly pinned Sun. 1….2. Sun kickout. Then Loretta picked Sun up and executed a triple vertical suplex.

Loretta said to Sun “haha! Loser!”

Then Loretta picked Sun up and kneed Sun’s stomch twice and quickly executed a spinning neck breaker on Sun.

Loretta said to Sun “haha! You think, you’re the only one you can fly.”

Then Loretta confidently walked towards the turnbuckle and climbs up. Sun is still lying down on the mat dazed. Then Loretta quickly executed a frog splash, but Sun quickly rolled out of the way, Loretta hits the mat hard. Sun quickly climbs up towards the top turnbuckle resisting the pain on her knees. Sun executed a diving leg drop bulldog on Loretta’s neck. Both Loretta and Sun suffered the effect. Loretta slowly walked towards to Sun. while Sun used the ropes for her to stand up. Sun saw Loretta coming towards her from behind. Sun quickly, pivot and appeared behind Loretta. Sun executed a springboard bulldog on Loretta. Sun hooked Loretta’s left leg for the pin.1…2. then Loretta countered it for a roll up. Loretta pinned Sun. 1…..2.then Sun kicked out. Both Loretta and Sun stand up at the same time, but Loretta grabs Sun’s left arm first. Loretta irish whip Sun towards the turnbuckle. Sun’s chest hits the turnbuckle, then from behind Loretta grabs Sun and executed a triple german suplex on Sun. Loretta dragged Sun near the turnbuckle. Sun is facing the mat, weaken. As Loretta climbs on the top turnbuckle, then Loretta executed a frog splash on Sun’s leg.

Sun screamed in pain “aaaaahhh! Oh! God No!”

Sun quickly rolled into the middle of the ring, while Loretta still recovering from the high risk maneuver she pulled off. Loretta slowly walked towards to Sun. Loretta grabs Sun’s both legs and then Loretta applied the figure four leglock on Sun.

Sun screamed in pain “aaaahhhhggg! No!”

The referee asked Sun “Sun you give up!”

Sun answered “no!”

Sun used her strength and turned and reversed it. Now Loretta is in pain.

Loretta screamed “aahhh!”

Then Loretta crawled and grabs the bottom rope, but Sun didn’t released the hold. The referee counted 1….2….3….4. then Sun break the hold. Loretta stands up and picked up and executed DDT on Sun. Loretta again picked up the weaken Sun. Loretta positioned Sun for the finisher the pedigree. Then Loretta executed the pedigree on Sun. Loretta hold Sun’s right leg and pin Sun. 1……2…..kickout by Sun. Loretta was shocked. Loretta stands up and approaches the referee.

Loretta shouted towards the referee “What! That’s was a slow count referee!”

When Loretta turned, Sun quickly kicked Loretta’s face.

Sun shouted towards to Loretta “Ninja’D kick!”

Loretta crushed down to the ground, then Sun quickly climbs to the top turnbuckle, then Sun executed an atomic fusion on Loretta, but Sun didn’t pinned Loretta. Sun climbs the top turnbuckle again, surprisingly executed a corkscrew 450 elbow splash on Loretta. Sun hooked Loretta’s right leg. 1…….2……3. ding ding ding. The wiiner of the match, ‘Shinobi’ ‘Lil Dragon’ Sun Wong! Sun remain seated on the ring.

Sun said to herself “Damn! My knees must got injuried.”

Referee asked Sun “you need help?”

Sun answered “no! the only one needed help is that Loser Loretta!”

Then Sun rolled out of ring and slowly walked back towards the backstage, then suddenly Sun collapses to the ground. Sun just crawled back, then suddenly paramedics and trainer helped Sun up and brought her to the infirmary, while some trainer and paramedics assisted Loretta.

(10 minutes later in the infirmary)

Sabrina approaches towards to Sun.

Sabrina asked Sun “Sunshine! You okay? I never thought Loretta skills improve that great.”

Sun answered “I’m okay Brina! Still I ninja’d Loretta didn’t I. I also hit my new move the ultrasplash elbow for you Brina!”

Sabrina said to Sun “yeah! That was ultra! Sunshine!”

Sun asked Sabrina “Do me favor, Brina. Try something new later against Brooke, and worry not about the cowd, they’ll chant ultragirl later.”

Sabrina said to Sun “sure Sunshine!”

Then suddenly Brenda, Monica, Marina and Catgirls arrived.

Brenda said to Sun “ohhhh!! Shiny!”

Sabrina turned around and saw Monica, Brenda, Marina and Catgirls.

Brenda said to Sun “Great match! You did there. I didn’t tap out!”

Then suddenly Loretta pass by, Sun still bit angry of Loretta. Loretta then approaches towards Sun.

Loretta said to Sun “sorry about the knees, you got some talent there! You and Sabrina, are great. I really wish, I would be great as you too.”

Loretta looked down with sad face. Then Sabrina approaches towards to Loretta.

Sabrina said to Loretta “cheer up! Loretta. It’s not the end yet.”

Loretta shouted towards Sabrina “I loss! Sabrina! Are you making fun of me!”

Sabrina said to Loretta “no! it’s not what you think!”

Then suddenly Marina walked towards to Loretta, and stopped in front of Loretta.

Marina said to Loretta “you are a great wrestler, Loretta. Even a loss, it’s not the end, you still have your chance in the future. It’s a very long process,”

Sabrina said to Loretta “yeah! Loretta.”

Then suddenly a doctor pass by,

The doctor said Loretta “Miss Diaz, you just need some rest maybe a week, you’re clear to wrestle.”

Then the doctor said to Sun “Ah! Sun, Sad to say it, but I have to put yu on sideline for awhile.”

Sun and Sabrina were shock.

Sun said to the doctor “No! I’m on winning streak here!”

Doctor said to Sun “sorry, Miss Wong, take a two weeks rest, or maybe a moth rest so it will heal.”

Then the doctor left. Sun is really angry.

Sun shouted towards to Loretta “It’s you’re fault! Loretta, I should put out for good!”

Sabrina said to Sun “calm down Sunshine!”

Sun shouted to Loretta “you just want to end my career! Loretta!”

Loretta said to Sun “I’m sorry Sun, I trying my best, but I didn’t mean to end or thinking ending career. Have you hear from the doctor, he said it will heal, two week or a month.”

Sun said to Loretta “that not it! I have a goal here, I almost reach it then you did this, so now I will be missing in action.”

Marina said to Sun “so, you’re hunt for the number 1 contenders belt, T.V. title to be exact.”

Sun and Sabrina were shocked.

Sun looked down and said to Marina “yes! I really like a title shot!”
Marina said to Sabrina “Sabrina, may I borrow your T.V. belt.”

Sabrina said to Marina “sure!”

Then Marina gave the T.V Belt towards to Marina, then Marina gave it to Loretta. Sun and Sabrina were shocked.

Marina said to Sun “Sun, let’s say! Loretta have the belt, then you’re friend Sabrina accidentally puts you on this situation, you’re in now. Will get mad at Sabrina? As well ending her up? I know you don’t like Brooke, but if you do that you’ll become like her.”

Sun answered “no! and I know Brina won’t do that!”

Marina said to Sun “oh! let say she did, it accidental. And you said you would get angry, think about it Sun.”

Then Loretta returned the T.V. belt to Sabrina.

Loretta said to Sun “I’m too. I also want the T.V. belt or the heavyweight belt,”

Brenda said to Loretta “Loretta, I’ll grant you a title shot, if you win 7 consecutive matches, but I want to see you improve your techniques on those. Each match have a new move, if you got it right, I’ll grant you a title shot.”

Snowkitten said to Brenda “you, making a hard match for her. Brenda”

Brenda said to Snowkitten “heheh!”

Loretta said to Brenda “muchas-gracias, Brenda!”

Brenda said to Loretta “Improve your matches, more. After that, even more.”

Loretta walked out of from the infirmary.

Then Brenda approaches towards to Sabrina and Sun.

Brenda said to Sabrina and Sun “Sabrina, and Sun. I’m amazed with you two. You improved fast. Maybe one day you’ll grab a tag team belt.”

Rose said to Sabrina and Sun “anytime! Sabrina, Sun!”

Brenda said to Sabrina “Sabrina! I felt you’re hiding some worries, since your match at Verhouse.”

Sabrina was shocked.

Sabrina said to Brenda “yeah! As you know.”
Brenda quickly interrupted and said to Sabrina “Don’t you worry about it! You got a match later on tonght, if you worry too much. The T.V. belt will be in Brooke’s hand. As I told Loretta, improve skills. I really wish you told me this earlier, so I can help you.”

Sabrina asked Brenda “aren’t you worried about your match later?”

Brenda answered “heheh! Nope!”

Sun asked Brenda “how about me? Brenda! Will you give me title shot! Surely you’ll get Ninja’D!”

Brenda laughed and answered “ahahah! You sure Sun! Loretta almost won against you, tonight.”

(Few Minutes later in the arena)

The Titantron randomly picked a Match. Then suddenly it appeared ‘Singles match’ then followed by ‘Mighty’ Monica Rumble’s face showed in the titantron.

(Back in the infirmary)

Brenda said to Monica “your turn Monica. Rumble them! Okay!”

Monica said to Brenda “thanks!”

Then Monica passed Sabrina and whispered.

Monica whispered to Sabrina “I’m gonna be your opponent, and that belt will be on mine. Ultragirl!”

Then Monica walked towards the ring.

(Few Minutes later)

Monica waits for her opponent in the ring, as the titantron randomly selected Monica’s opponent. Then suddenly Danielle Perfection’s face showed on the titantron. Then Danielle walked towards the ring. As Danielle stands in front of Monica, then the bell rang ding ding! Danielle and Monica locked on a collar elbow tie up, but Danielle easily over power Monica, as Danielle pushed Monica down. Monica crushed down to ground, and just looked Danielle. Monica quickly stands up. Then Monica and Danielle again locked in a collar elbow tie up, but Danielle quickly kneed Monica’s stomach twice, and hit Monica with a DDT. Danielle quickly elbow drop Monica’s chest twice. Danielle executed jumping knee dorp on Monica. Then Danielle quickly pinned Monica.1….2. but Monica easily kicked out. Then Danielle picked Monica up, but Monica surprisingly executed a spine buster on Danielle. As the crowd roar and cheer on Monica. Monica stomp Danielle’s chest five times, and then Monica followed by a leg drop on Danielle’s face. Monica picked Danielle up, and executed a bodyslam Danielle. Then Monica picked Danielle up again and executed a spine neckbreaker on Danielle. Monica quickly pinned Danielle. 1….2..Kickout by Danielle. Monica again picked up Danielle and irish whip Danielle to the turnbuckle, but Danielle easily reserved it and irish whip Monica towards the turnbuckle. Danielle charges towards to Monica and clothesline Monica. Danielle applied a bearhug on Monica.

Monica screamed in pain “ahhhhh!”

The referee asked Monica “you want to give up?”

Monica answered “no!”

Monica headbutt Danielle twice, after that Danielle released Monica. Monica clothesline Danielle, but Danielle ducked and turn and speared Monica. Danielle picked Monica up executed a samoan drop on Monica. Danielle quickly hooked Monica’s left leg for the pin. 1….2. Monica kickout. Danielle grabs Monica by the hair, and irish whip Monica towards the turnbuckle. Danielle walked towards to Monica, and slapped Monica’s right chick.

Danielle said to Monica “small and weak! Rival Angels should draft me not you! They made a serious mistake.”

Then Danielle grabs Monica’s left hand and irish whip Monica towards the other turnbuckle, then when Monica hits on the turnbuckle, Danielle executed a running boot to the face of Monica. Monica dropped to the mat, with her face on the mat. Danielle dragged Monica into the middle of ring. Danielle applied a camel clutch on Monica.

Monica screamed in pain “aaaahhhhh!”

Danielle shouted towards Monica “Tap! Now!”

Monica used all her strength to vertically stands up, Danielle was shocked by Monica strength. Then Monica dropped Danielle from her back, then both Monica and Danielle laid down on the ground. As the referee counted 1…..2…..3.…4…. then both Danielle and Monica stands up. Danielle clothelines Monica, but Monica ducked down. Monica dropped kicked Danielle’s right leg, then Monica executed a snapmare on Danielle and followed by a kick on the back. Monica prepared to finish Danielle off with a dominator, but Monica can’t pulled the dominator off, coz Danielle blocked it. Danielle elbowed twice on Monica’s stomach area. Then Danielle carried Monica on her right shoulder, prepare for the running powerslam. As Danielle ran, Monica slipped away, and pushed Danielle, in which Danielle hits on the turnbuckle. Monica quickly executed a schoolgirl roll up on Danielle. 1……2….Danielle kickout. Monica picked up Danielle, but Danielle punched Monica. Danielle quickly executed a swinging sidewalk slam Monica. Then Danielle picked Monica on a gorilla press, and slammed Monica on the mat. Then Danielle hooked Monica’s left leg and pin Monica. 1…..2…but Monica kickout. Danielle became very angry and approaches the referee.

Danielle shouted towards the referee “That was three! Monica wouldn’t kickout!”

Referee said to Danielle “That was 2. Danielle!”

Monica stands up and charges towards to Danielle, but Danielle sidestep to the left and pushed Monica towards the referee. Monica collided with the referee, and the referee fell out to the ring. As Monica turned Danielle carried Monica on her right shoulder and executed the running powerslam on Monica. Then Danielle walked out of the ring and approaches the referee.

Danielle said to the referee “She’s down, I’m gonna pin her now!”

Then Danielle quickly rolled back into the ring, but Monica stands up and kicked Danielle on the stomach and executed a dominator on Danielle. Monica hooked Danielle’s left leg and pinned Danielle. 1…..2….3.. Monica Rumble wins. Ding ding ding.

(2 minutes later, Brenda’s locker room)

Monica arrived.

Brenda said to Monica “tough match, Monica! You need some more training.”

Monica looked down and said to Brenda “yeah! I almost loss.”

Snowkitten said to Monica “cheer up! Mon Mon. you’ve won, You’ll improve more, in the future.”

Monica said to Brenda and Snowkitten “she’s strong! Hell strong! Like an ox!”

Snowkitten said Brenda, Monica and Marina “catch ya! Later!”

Then the catgirls walked out from the locker room and headed towards the ring.

Marina said to Monica “it’s not about she’s strong or tougher, Monica. Everybody got tough and strong problem, just beat it and gain expirence move on, you’ll be stronger.”

Brenda said to Marina “ah? You just got it right, half of it though. Heheh!”

To be Continued....
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby lordmgc on Wed May 20, 2009 7:53 am

Chapter 12: Lying in the sand


(Upstart locker room)

Aizawa approaches towards to Sabrina.

Aizawa asked Sabrina “Sabrina, who do you think will win? Catgirls or the terrors?”

Sabrina answered “I’ll bet on the Catgirls, they’re undefeated in tag team matches and still improving their skills.”

Krystin said to Sabrina “oh! I remember you almost lose to the tower of terrors, back at Halloween special.”

Sabrina said to Krystin “I also remembered that, you lose to the catgirls, and besides what’s wrong with Brooke, she hasn’t arrived yet. What’s keeping her?”

Krytin said to Sabrina “you’re lucky Sabrina, if Brooke doesn’t show up.”

Krystin asked Sabrina “if Brooke, didn’t show up. Will you give a title shot on your TV belt now?”

Sabrina answered “sure! Krystin, Anytime!”

(Back in the ring)

The Catgirls waiting for the Tower of Terror to come in. then on that moment the Tower of Terrors walk towards the ring, but the Catgirls rushly attack the Towers of Terror outside of the ring. Snowkitten dropkicked Zombie Luna on the face, after it Snowkitten landed on her feet and enziguri Zombie Luna, but Zombie Luna is still standing. Zombie Luna clothesline Snowkitten, but Snowkitten ducked down and rake at Zombie Luna’s back, As Zombie Luna turned and face Snowkitten, Snowkitten thumb to the eye on Zombie Luna. Snowkitten executed a hurricanrana on Zomibie Luna, suddenly Rose stands on the barricade and the moonsault splash down on Zombie Luna. Then suddenly Lover Lover double fist hammer on Snowkitten head, Snowkitten fell to the ground. As Rose quickly crossbody Lover Lola, but Lover Lola easily carried Rose on her arms. Then Lover lola executed a sidewalk slam on Rose. Zombie Luna stands up grabs a folded steel cheer from the audience. Zombie Luna approaches towards to Snowkitten and then prepare to hit Snowkitten with a steel chair, but Snowkitten quickly vertical double kick on Zombie Luna’s face. Then as Rose leaps on the barricade and executed 360 roll followed by sole to kicked Zombie Luna’s head. Zombie Luna crushed down to the ground. As Lover Lola charges towards to Snowkitten from behind. Snowkitten moonsault flip over Lover Lola and dropkicked Lover Lola’s head. Then Lover Lola crushed down to the ground. The crowd wildly cheer for the Catgirls. Snowkitten grabs both Zombie Luna’s both arm and drag her towards the left, in which there’s special kitty sand. Then suddenly Zombie Luna just grabs Snowkitten both hand. Snowkitten was shocked. Then Zombie Luna stands up.

Snowkitten shouted towards Rose “Rose! Help!”

Then Zombie Luna prepared to tombstone piledriver Snowkitten, as Rose quickly rush to help Snowkitten. Then suddenly Lover Lola grabs Rose’s shoulder from behind. Rose turned then Lover Lola punched Rose on the face. Then Lover Lola gorilla press Rose and drop Rose on the barricade, while Zombie Luna tombstone pilediver Snowkitten. Then Zombie Luna and Lover Lola walked towards the graveyard. Zombie Luna grabs a shovel, while Lover Lola grabs a sledge hammer. Zombie Luna approaches towards to Snowkitten, while Lover Lola walked towards to Rose Ryoko. Zombie Luna aimed the shovel on Snowkitten’s head. Zombie Luna strikes the shovel on Snowkitten head, but Snowkitten easily rolled out of the way. Then Snowkitten stands up. Snowkitten saw Lover Lola is ready to strike the sledge hammer. Snowkitten quickly rushed to help Rose Ryoko. Zombie Luna strikes the shovel vertically downwards on Snowkitten, but Snowkitten easily pivot and run towards to Lover Lola. Snowkitten quickly applied a sleeper hold on Lover Lola.

Snowkitten shouted to Rose “Meow! Rose! Get up!”

Then Rose slowly opened her eyes, and saw Snowkitten applied the sleeper hold on Lover Lola, then saw Zombie Luna coming towards to Snowkitten. Rose quickly run towards to Zombie Luna. Zombie Luna prepares to strike Snowkitten’s back with a shovel. Then Rose quickly speared Zombie Luna and rammed Zombie towards the barricade, but suddenly Lover Lola used her strength and rammed Snowkitten, in which collided with Rose. Then Rose and Snowkitten collapse to the ground. Lover Lola grabs Snowkitten by the face and threw her towards the kitty sand. As Lover Lola approaches near on Snowkitten. Snowkitten quickly sweep kicked Lover Lola, then Lover Lola fell on the sand. Then Snowkitten turned and saw two rectangular holes just two meters behind her. Snowkitten grabs Lover Lola and irish whip to the Lover Lola, but Lover Lola countered wuth a clothesline on Snowkitten. Lover Lola picked Snowkitten up and executed a powerbomb on Snowkitten. Suddenly Rose Ryoko charges towards to Lover Lola from behind, but Zombie Luna hits Rose back with a shovel. Rose just crushed down to the ground. Zombie Luna picked up Rose Ryoko and put Rose Ryoko on her left shoulder. Then Zombie Luna walked towards the graveyard, while Lover Lola dragged Snowkitten. Zombie Luna executed a tombstone piledriver on Rose Ryoko. Then Zombie Luna rolled Rose in to the hole, while Lover Lola puts Snowkitten on the other hole. Then Zombie Luna picked up the shovel, then suddenly Rose Ryoko instantly jumps on Zombie Luna, and executed a hurricarana, now Zombie Luna is in the hole. Lover Lola turned and saw Rose Ryoko, then suddenly Snowkitten grabs Lover Lola’s both legs, then Lover Lola fell down, and Snowkitten pulled Lover Lola in to the hole. Snowkitten quickly leaps and back up. As the crowd cheer for the Catgirls. The referee approaches towards to Snowkitten and Rose.

The referee said to Snowkitten and Rose “Catgirls, in order to win, you must puts them on the left side in which the kitty sand are.”

Snowkitten said to referee “I know”
Rose asked Snowkitten “What’s the plan?”

Snowkitten answered “let’s play for a while, shall we Rose”

Then Snowkitten and Rose Ryoko waited for Zombie Luna and Lover Lola. Then suddenly Zombie Luna and Lover Lola stand up, then quickly Snowkitten baseball slide Zombie Luna, while Rose Ryoko also baseball slide Lover Lola. Then both, Zombie Luna and Lover Lola fell down to the hole again. then again Zombie Luna and Lover Lola came out from the holes. Rose and Snowkitten taunted them to come on. Zombie Luna and Lover Lola quickly charge towards to Rose and Snowkitten. Rose executed a drop toe hold on Zombie Luna, as well Snowkitten executed drop toe hold on Lover Lola. Then Rose Ryoko applied the figure four leglock on Zombie Luna, while Snowkitten applied the boston crab on Lover Lola. Then suddenly, Zombie Luna caught and Rose Ryoko and grabs Rose Ryoko by the neck and choke her. Rose released the figure four. Snowkitten saw Rose is trouble. Snowkitten released Lover Lola and quickly rushed towards to Zombie Luna, but Zombie Luna caught Snowkitten by the neck. Then Zombie Luna prepare to chokeslam both Snowkitten and Rose in the graveyard holes, but both Snowkitten and Rose Ryoko countered it into a double jumping DDT on Zombie Luna. Then suddenly, Lover Lola speared Snowkitten, as both Snowkitten and Lover Lola fell in to the hole.

Rose shouted “Snow!”

Then suddenly behind Rose Ryoko, Zombie Luna stands up. As Rose Ryoko turned Zombie Luna threw soil onto Rose’s eyes. Then Zombie Luna easily chokeslam Rose Ryoko into the hole. Then Zombie slowly walked to the the shovel, in which it’s twenty five meters away from her. Then suddenly Lover Lola came out from the hole leaving Snowkitten in it. Then Zombie Luna and Lover Lola got a shovel each, and then they covered Rose and Snowkitten with dirt. Then after a minute, Lover Lola and Zombie Luna raise their hands. As the crowd booo’ed them, Then suddenly Rose Ryoko executed a german suplex on Zombie Luna. Then Lover Lola quickly charges towards to Rose Ryoko, but out of nowhere Snowkitten speared Lover Lola.

Rose said to Snowkitten “Good thing, our plan work, Snow! If not we’ll already loss.”

Snowkitten said to Rose “hehe! I already know, those Towers are just easy to fool,”

Rose picked Zombie Luna, and excuted a piledriver, with an assist of Snowkitten. Then Snowkitten saw Lover Lola coming. Snowkitten quickly pick Zombie Luna up and irish whip Zombie Luna towards to Lover Lola. Zombie Luna and Lover Lola collided. Rose grabs a fifteen foot ladder, as Rose climbs up the fifteen foot ladder. Snowkitten executed a spinning neckbreaker on Zombie Luna, then Rose just splash down on Zombie Luna’s chest. Rose dragged Zombie Luna to the kitty sand area, while Snowkitten climbs up the fifteen foot ladder, and splash down on Lover Lola, but Lover Lola puts her knees up, as Snowkitten hits Lover Lola’s knees. Rose puts Zombie Luna in the hole and used her hands to cover Zombie Luna, but suddenly Zombie Luna stands up and chokes Rose Ryoko. Zombie Luna chokeslam Rose, but Rose slips and executed a DDT on Zombie Luna. Meanwhile Lover Lola military press Snowkitten, but Snowkitten easily slip by Lover Lola’s hands, Snowkitten landed behind Lover Lola. Snowkitten quickly executed a double knee backbreaker on Lover Lola, as Rose Ryoko climbs on the fifteen foot ladder and executed a cat splash on Lover Lola.

Snowkitten said to Rose “Rose, let’s finish this match!”

Rose and Snowkitten quickly charge towards to Zombie Luna on the kitty sand area. As Zombie Luna stands up, Snowkitten excuted a enziguri on Zombie Luna, then after that, Rose Ryoko connected with a double knee face breaker on Zombie Luna. Then Zombie Luna fell down to the hole. Then Snowkitten and Rose quicky used their hands to bury Zombie Luna in the kitten sand. Then suddenly Lover Lola stands up.

Rose said to Snowkitten “This match isn’t our favor, Snow! We use our hands to bury them, while they can use shovel. Totally disadvantage.”

Snowkitten said to Rose “not to worry, let do the cat barrage, on Lover Lola first.”

Then Snowkittten and Rose quickly charges towards to Lover Lola. Rose quickly jumps and executed a 360 roll on the air and landed down with a kick on Lover Lola’s head, then Snowkitten follow up with a dropkick on Lover Lola’s back. Then Rose executed a sitting senton on Lover Lola’s back, then follow by Snowkitten executed a Cat splash from the fiftten foot ladder. Then Rose and Snowkitten quickly dragged Lover Lola on the hole. Then Snowkitten and Rose Ryoko quickly buries Lover Lola into the kitten sand. Then suddenly Zombie Luna’s hand rise up and Zombie Luna stands up. Then Snowkitten and Rose quickly charges towards to Zombie Luna. Rose grabs Zombie Luna from behind, then Snowkitten in front of Zombie Luna. Snowkitten executed a handstand double kick to Zombie Luna’s face, followed by Rose executed a german suplex on Zombie Luna. Zombie Luna fell again to the hole. Then Rose and Snowkitten quickly buried Zombie Luna using their hands. Then after a few minutes, Rose and Snowkitten successful buried Zombie Luna in.

The Referee approaches towards to The Catgirls.

The Referee said to the Catgirls “You still need to bury Lover Lola.”

Then Rose and Snowkitten look on the other hole, Lover Lola isn’t there. Then suddenly Rose and Snowkitten and saw Lover Lola coming towards them with full speed, then Rose and Snowkitten countered it with a double back body drop on Lover Lola, as Lover Lola fell into the hole. Then Snowkitten and Rose quickly buried Lover Lola in.. then minutes later ding ding ding! And the Winner of the match and Still Rival Angels Tag Team Champions, the Catgirls.



(Commissioner’s skybox)

Geese said to Johann the Voodoo Potentate “oh! I didn’t expect, them to lose to the catgirls, but I may give you an offer, to wrestle in the Verhouse. As you know, I’m planning a prestige Tag Team belt on Verhouse.”

Johann the Voodoo Potentate said to Geese “sure, no problem.. I just want my Towers to have spots light of Darkness and distruction.”

Geese said Johann the Voodoo Pontentate “Good thing you called me, and offer your Towers of Terrors in service. I can keep that in mind. And don’t worry about this match, the cats will lose on Verhouse.”

(3 minutes later, Brenda’s locker room)

Rose and Snowkitten arrived, While Brenda is talking on her cellphone.

(On the Phone)


Brenda said “sure! No problem! You want to talk to the catgirls?”

Unknown caller said “on them on the line,”

Brenda said to the Snowkitten “Snowkitten, it’s for you.”


Then Brenda gave the cellphone to Snowkitten.

(On the Phone)

Snowkitten said “Hello”

Unknown Caller said “Snowkitten, you and Rose must not compete in Verhouse this week. I have a feeling after the win you got, Geese will plan out bad. I just gave, Brenda, Marina, Monica and you and Rose, autograph signing. Don’t worry, I don’t think it will happen what Xtina expirence.”

Snowkitten said “Gotcha!”

Unknown Caller said “can I speak to Brenda.”

Then Snowkitten gave the cellphone to Brenda.



(On The Phone)

Unknown Caller asked “Who do you think? Aren’t influence?”

Brenda answered “I certainly don’t trust the Hell’s Belles, after all Geese favored them. Last Monday putting me in some short of a handicap match, Good thing, De Sade didn’t executed the con-chair-to. There’s a possibility that, Geese commanded them. I don’t know about the others.”

Unknown Caller said “You maybe right, I’ll call back you later, just becareful.”

Brenda said “No problem”

Then Brenda hanged the phone.

Brenda said to Catgirls “great job! Defending your tag team belts, Snowkitten, Rose. Burying the Tower of Terrors, on the kitten sand is great.”

Then suddenly Marina came in.

Brenda asked Marina “any sign of the Hell’s Belles? Are they here?”

Marina answered “actually no! I went pass by their skybox, I just felt their not here yet. Usually Chloe’s voice can get out of the skybox, the weird part is that it’s silent.”

Monica asked Brenda “could it be that, the Hell’s Belles are in the commissioner’s skybox?”

Brenda answered “you may have a point there. If the Hell’s Belles with Geese, I must really defeat them at all cost.”

Snowkitten asked Brenda “do you need us in your corner?”

Brenda answered “no thanks, Snow. I need to do this myself.”

Marina said to Brenda “Chloe is been acting, bit strange lately. You know Brenda.”

Brenda said to Marina “yes. The Hell’s Belles could have injured me last time, Chloe refuse.”

Monica said to Brenda “could she playing mind games,”

Brenda said to Monica “could be,”



(Upstart locker room)

Sun said to Sabrina “don’t worry about the last two match, Brina! You beat Brooke once, I know you can do it again.”

Then suddenly Camilla approaches towards to Sabrina.

Camilla said to Sabrina “Sabrina, I already gave you tips. Try it! I guarantee you’ll win.”

Sun shouted towards to Camilla “What the hell! Camilla! Are you playing mind games, to make Brina out of focus on her title match!”

Sabrina said to Sun “Calm down Sunshine. Eheh!”

Krystin askd Sabrina “Sabrina, are you sure you’re going to the ring? I mean Brooke it not here, if you went to the ring?”

Sabrina answered “don’t worry, Krystin! If Brooke won’t show up in which been forfeited, you can come out.”

Krystin said to Sabrina “Thanks Sabrina!”

Then Krystin approaches towards to Sun.

Krystin said to Sun “sorry! Ninja! Looks like I’m the number one contender after Brooke, not you.”

Sun shouted to Krystin “when I get my hands on you Krystin!”

Then Sabrina walked out from the locker, and head towards the ring.


To Be Continued.....
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby BrendaRua on Wed May 20, 2009 7:58 pm

Ha! I knew Rose and Snow could pull this off! They may not be the biggest and strongest, but they're sure the trickiest! I liked how they set up their opponents to think they had a win so they would be sloppy.

Nice one!
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Re: Rival Angels Fanfic

Postby lordmgc on Thu May 21, 2009 1:51 am

Chapter 13: Upgrade


The crowd cheered wildly on Sabrina’s entrance. The crowd chants “ULTRA-GIRL!” “SABRINA!” Sabrina felt confortable in coming to the ring. Then when Sabrina is in the ring, Brooke’s music started. Then suddenly, Brooke appeared on the crowd hold a microphone.

Brooke said (Australian accent) “hold it! I’m coming!”

Then Brooke walked to the ring. Then minutes later, Brooke and Sabrina face each other.

Sabrina said to Brooke “you’re late!”

Brooke said to Sabrina (Australian accent) “but that belt, will be mine!”

Then the bell rang. Ding ding! Brooke and Sabrina lock in a collar elbow tie up. Brooke executed a hip toss, but Sabrina easily landed on her feet, Brooke was shocked. Then Sabrina executed a hip toss on Brooke. Then Brooke and Sabina lock in a collar elbow tie up again, then Sabrina irish whip Brooke, then Sabrina quickly did a leg split, As Brooke jumps over Sabrina, then Sabrina executed monkey flip on Brooke. Brooke crushed down, to ground. Brooke stands up. Sabrina quickly eexecuted a spinning wheel kick on Brooke, as Brooke fell out of the ring. Sabrina leaps on the top rope and crossbody splash down on Brooke, but Brooke easily catches Sabrina. Brooke rammed Sabrina’s body twice on the steel post and followed up a fall away slam. Brooke picked Sabrina up, and irish whip her towards the steel post. Sabrina collided on the steel post and crush down to the ground. Brooke picked Sabrina and rolled her back into the ring. Then Brooke rolled into the ring and quickly pinned Sabrina. 1…then Sabrina kickout. Then Brooke picked up Sabrina and irish whip Sabrina towards the turnbuckle, but Sabrina balance and walk on the turnbuckle pads until she reach the top turnbuckle. Brooke quickly charges towards to Sabrina, but instantly Sabrina flips over Brooke, and followed by a dropkick Brooke from behind. Brooke hits the turnbuckle. Sabrina quickly charges towards to Brooke on the turnbuckle, then Sabrina handstand on the top rope and executed a rope aided corner dropkick on Brooke’s back.

Brooke screamed “aaaahhhhgg!”

Then Sabrina quickly executed a schoolgirl roll up on Brooke. 1….2.Brooke kicked out. Both Brooke and Sabrina stands up. Brooke quickly clotheslines Sabrina, but Sabrina easily ducked down and bounce herself off the ropes, Sabrina crossbody block on Brooke, but Brooke rammed her head in Sabrina chest. Sabrina crushed down to the ground. Brooke executed pointed elbow drop three times on Sabrina’s chest. Then Brooke picked Sabrina up executed a piledriver on Sabrina. As the crowd cheered ‘Sabrina!’ ‘Sabrina!’ Brooke grabs Sabrina by the hair and pulled Sabrina up.

Brooke said to Sabrina (Australian accent) “I got yo number mate! This time you’re belt is mine”

Brooke executed belly to belly suplex on Sabrina. Brooke didn’t waste any time, Brooke position Sabrina for a powerbomb, when Brooke carried Sabrina up, Sabrina quickly rolled to back of Brooke and executed a roll up. 1….then Brooke kicked out. Brooke stands up and charges towards to Sabrina. Brooke clothesline Sabrina, but Sabrina ducked down and pivot and appeared behind Brooke. Sabrina dropkick Brooke’s back again, as Brooke fell down and hanged on the second rope. Sabrina executed a 619, but Brooke evaded it, Brooke hammered Sabrina’s back with both hands. Then Sabrina fell down to the ground. Then Brooke executed a vertical suplex on Sabrina, but Sabrina easily slip out and quickly runs towards the ropes. Brooke chased Sabrina, instead Sabrina leaps on the top rope and moonsault flip over Brooke, then Sabrina lock her legs behind Brooke’s neck and executed a hurranrana. Brooke slowly stands up, but still daze. Sabrina leaps on the second rope and then turn and hit Brooke with a jumping high knee.
Sabrina quickly position Brooke in the middle of the ring. Then Sabrina wasted no time and climbs the top turnbuckle. Then Sabrina executed the ultrasplash, but Brooke instantly puts her knees up, then Sabrina hits Brooke’s knees. Both Brooke and Sabrina are down. As the referee counted 1…….2……3…..then Brooke stands up, while Sabrina is still laying down on the mat. Brooke picked Sabrina up and executed a gutwrench powerbomb Sabrina. Brooke hooked Sabrina’s right leg and the pin. 1….2..Kickout. Sabrina kickout, Brooke was shocked. Brooke kicked Sabrina five times on her chest. Then Brooke quickly hooked Sabrina’s left leg and pin Sabrina. 1….then Sabrina rolled Brooke for the pin. 1…..2. Brooke kicked out. Brooke charges towards Sabrina, Brooke executed a shoulder block, but Sabrina countered it into belly to back suplex. Then again, Brooke rolled to the outside.

Brooke said to herself (Austrailian Accent) “Damn that Sabrina! She never gives up!”

Then suddenly Sabrina hits Brooke with a baseball slide, in which it hits Brooke’s face. Then Sabrina went out of the ring, and rolled Brooke into the ring. When Sabrina was about to get in, Brooke quickly grabs Sabrina by the neck on the second ropes and executed a DDT. Brooke pulled Sabrina up by the neck and executed a chokeslam, but Sabrina countered it into a DDT. Then both Sabrina and Brooke are down. Then the referee counts 1…..2……3…..4…then Sabrina stands up first, then suddenly Brooke stands up, but still daze. Sabrina quickly executed the ultrakick, but Brooke noticed it and grabs Sabrina’s leg, but Sabrina turned it into a spinning roundhouse kick. Then Sabrina pick Brooke up and executed a ranhei on Brooke. 1….2.but Brooke kicked out. Brooke grabs Sabrina’s right arm and irish whip Sabrina to the turnbuckle, but Sabrina leaps on the top turnbuckle and executed a whispering the wind on Brooke. Then Sabrina hooked Brooke’s left leg for the pin. 1…..2…then Brooke kickout. Sabrina position herself and waited for Brooke to stand up. Then Brooke stands up, Sabrina quickly hits Brooke with the ultrakick, but Brooke pivot and elbow Sabrina’s back on the head. Brooke executed a german suplex on Sabrina. Brooke wasted no time, and picked Sabrina up, then Brooke executed the vertibreaker on Sabrina.

Brooke shouted (Australian Accent) “Game Over!”

Then Brooke hooked Sabrina’s left leg and for the pin. 1…..2..then Sabrina place her right leg on the bottom ropes. The referee saw it.

The referee said to Brooke “Sabrina foot on the ropes.”

Brooke stands up and shouted “I can’t belive it!”

Then Brooke pulled Sabrina into the middle of the ring, and then pinned Sabrina. 1…..2..then Sabrina kickout. Brooke was shocked. Brooke grabs Sabrina’s left arm, but Sabrina escapes and hit Brooke with the ultrakick. Then both Sabrina and Brooke crushed down to the ground. Sabrina manages to place her right arm on Brooke’s stomach. Then the referee counts 1…..2.Brooke kickout. Both Sabrina and Brooke still laying on the ground. Brooke stands up first, and pick Sabrina up. Brooke irish whip Sabrina towards the turnbuckle, but Sabrina reversed it. So Brooke hit on the turnbuckle, then Sabrina handstand followed by a leg grab on Brooke’s head and slam Brooke on the mat. Sabrina stands back on her feets and quickly leaps on the top turnbuckle and executed a 630 splash on Brooke. 1….2….3..Ding Ding Ding and the winner of the match and still Rival Angels TV Champion ‘Ultragirl’ Sabrina Mancini. The crowd cheered wildly

The referee gave the belt to Sabrina, then Sabrina walked back to the locker room, while Brooke is still knockout on the ring.

(2 minutes later, Upstarts locker room)

Sabrina walked in. then Sun quickly embraced Sabrina.

Sun said to Sabrina “I’m amazed Brina! You really show Aphrodite, a thing or two.”

Sabrina said to Sun “yeah! Sunshine. I have to admit that, Brooke really pushed me to the limit, though. I almost loss when she hit me with her finisher good thing, I was near the ropes.”

Sun said to Sabrina “630 splash great! You could modify it though.”

Sabrina said to Sunshine “I’ll improve more Sunshine!, and I hope Brooke’s okay!”


(On the Angel Dome underground parking lot)

A limousine just arrived, then suddenly Chloe, Katherine, Jennifer and Isabelle walked out from the limousine. Chloe, Katherine and Jennifer are in their wrestling gear.

Isabelle bowed down before Chloe.

Isabelle said to Chloe “My Queen, let me fight your battle, after all I already help you to the seraphim belt in the Verhouse. You’re injured please!”

Then Chloe grabs Isabelle by the throut and pulled her up.

Chloe said to Isabelle “Hold your tongue L’esclaves! I have to win this belt, Rival Angels heavyweight belt belongs to me! Not you!”

Isabelle said to Chloe “but! My Queen! The doctors order, you’re not clear to wrestle. If you wrestle now.”

Chloe kneed Isabelle’s stomach three times and threw her towards the limousine, then Isabelle just crushed on the ground, with tears on her eyes, while Katherine and Jennifer just stared at Isabelle.

Chloe said to Jennifer and Katherine “Jennifer, Katherine. Let’s go!”
Then Chloe, Katherine and Jennifer walked and headed towards the ring. While Isabelle is kneeling on the ground crying.

Isabelle said to herself “Chloe, please do becareful! You’re not clear to wrestle, you got internal injuries. Please!”

(Commissioner’s skybox)

Geese said “oh! Sabrin won! Amusing though, Sabrina improve her skills.”

Geese asked “would you like to test her? In an one on one match.”

Lil Alexandria appeared from the shadow

Lil Alexandria laughed and answered “hiahahhahiahha! I would love too, challenge her. I see blood on her coming out! Hiahahhahah.”

Geese asked Lil Alexandria “what type of match?”

Lil Alexandria pointed her cane on Geese’s right eye and answered “Don’t matter, don’t care! Uu! Could that be a match! Don’t matter don’t care match! Hihihhahahahha!”

Then Lil Alexandria quits pointing her cane on Geese right eye.

Geese said to Lil Alexandria “ha? Okay okay! Just a singles match one on one! Lil Alexandria VS ‘Ultragirl’ Sabrina Mancini this Friday at Verhouse. To make it more interesting, if you win. This Friday, on the PAY Per View event this Sunday! You’ll be the number one contender for the TV Belt.”

To Be Continued.....
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